The Dreamer
A Solitary wanderer,
in the pursuit of comrades,
A vagabond wandering,
in search of happy souls.
A dreamer who dreams of,
nightmares that haunt, and hurts,
An abhorrent past, I nurse,
desires a grand future,
A dreamer that I am,
with fake dreams,
I desire a day, but,
the darkness beckons,
The quest of Numero Uno,
but my dreams patrol me,
I am a thinker,
drifting away and apart,
A fake sage, a zilch,
A devils workshop, an ideal mind,
Of all the malicious beings,
backstabbers, spewing pain,
Know the dreams of the dreamer
A lonely soul,
whining all the way,
Running for the gold,
I fall back in the race,
With an eye full of dreams,
reaching the zenith,
But dreaming won’t help,
for once I decide not to dream,
Life is short,
but dreams are big,
Work hard with no dreams,
Toil hard, don’t give up,
Just like a little sparrow,
Touch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky.
this was written….. many years ago w+hen i was in school
so its too simple like bachha sorts
Feelings well put into words..That too u say it was long back… Gr8 work..
But i feel, u got to dream… Wat’s the meaning of ‘sky limit’ when u don’t know wat it is….
Hope i made sense..
Anyway, keep posting..
Cheers..!!
Arjun
ty
touching the sky means becoming successful and moreover u w+ill be successful only if u work hard and put in efforts for the same
lol u were a dreamer in school?
And this u call bachcha sorts :O
in scholl i dint know what nightmares, fake dreams and backstabber meant!
hmm may be u wre poor in studies and i was extra ordinary…i wrote my first story at 13
imagine ….u wud be anazed if u read it
@ divya
i was not a dreamer in school….may be i was ….. but the purpose of this poem is to stop dreaming and put in efforts to bring things and ur goals into pictures
Dude….please don call it bacha sorts…actually good…too good considering the fact that u were a kid wen u actually wrote….good job…keep it up dude..
hmm yeah i w+as a bachha then
hehehehe
good one !!
ty mr 69
…for sure you are a dreamer!it will help you change that world who unpromotes dreaming…..
It may be simple but it touches the heart.. Really nice… 🙂
aww nice work!
@ olimpia may be it happens so
@ anindita
ty for that ….
@ me
thanks a lot dear frnd
hi, saw your question on Sameera’s blog.. thing is you used the wrong url
put this one in header section
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Thats in case if Sami has not replied yet 🙂
Else she will sure help you out
nice n lovely poem.
many all ur dreams get fulfilled and u may touch d sky
it doesnt matter if u wrote it when u were a kid..
what matters is the feelings u put in there…
great touching work
its really nice..
n i agree with shruti.. doesnt matter when u wrote it..its all about the feelings that u have put in it..
“Touch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky.”
itss so true.. one always need to try..
ty lena nw i got it
ty preetilata
so kind of u dear
@ shruti yeah rightly said girl
@ anila
yup thats right and very much true
nice stephen.
i luv writing poems too. a couple on my blog.
cum to my blog sumtym?
http://www.shipwrecklagoon.blogspot.com/
see ya
hey sana nice seeing u here
yeah sure wud love to go to ya blog
will visit for sure
rightly said
Touch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky.
Visit your blog after a long ……. nothings changed except for the theme 🙂
@ DAN TY DEAR
NOTHING CHANGED LOL
YEAH MAY BEE
wow!!…lovely poem
loved ur new template..its cool!! ^^
ty sidrah
That was a good one bro’… Loved the ending. Reminds me of the following lines, my Prof’s oft quoted saying-
“Excellence is your watchword; the sky is your limit”
a la the Indian Air Force. He coined it for them when he was part of the force.
‘Dreams will be high,
The future is nigh,
Have your goal in sight,
And never give up without a fight!’
yes i know thats true
donno wht i was thinking the other day so penned it down
I know you didnt know me when you wrote ths poem , but every word related to me !!! I wonder how you wrote ths ???