One Night Stand on a New Year’s Night – 2010 is a work of fiction.
Monday ->Piyali.
Tuesday->Misbah
Wednesday->Parizad
Thursday ->Marissa
Friday->Isabelle
Saturday->Deepali
Sunday->Tanpreet
Caste no bar. Even he didn’t care for any religion or community. He changed girls like clothes. He slept with different girls every night. Girls quickly fell prey to him. He was not less than a big flirt. He never followed the concept of marriage. He refused to accept and respect Indian culture and traditions. He never cared for anyone. But there was someone who loved him. She was a pretty-looking Indian girl. She only knew the good side of him. He was a rude and discourteous person.
“Where are we going?” the girl asked him.
“To heaven,” he said.
“Am gonna take you to a special place tonight,” he added.
“Oh, is it dear!” she said
It was a brand new year, and he took her to a hotel far away from the central city. She left her parents just for him. She was about to elope with him.
He held her tightly in his arms. But unfortunately, the world was busy celebrating the new year, and they were stranded alone in a dark room.
He moved closer to her, and she moved away from him
“What is hell are you going to do to me?” She said with a straight face
“I’m going to show you heaven,” He tried to kiss her.
He tickled her. He kissed her sexy cheeks. The girl kissed him back. But she clearly understood his intentions by then and stayed away from him.
“I love you,” He said.
“Oh, is it! Do you really love me or my body,” she said.
“You’re a bloody asshole, fucking loser,” she said.
He strangled her and grabbed her firmly as if he was going to rape her at midnight. She kicked him hard and ran away.
“I may not be the same whom you were looking for, and I know what you did to that girl last year, you fucking loser,” She said and left the place.
He sat on the bed, and her words reminded her of the innocent girl he played with one year ago the same night.
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Hmmmm… *Silent ovation* Do not want to be first person so open mouth. Will come back later.
well… give him a lifer in prison after some physical alterations π
Powerful post. I don't know who felt lonelier, him or the girl.
I liked both the parts of the post..I fail to understand – why do people take a fiction story so seriously? I am sure we all have the liberty to enjoy the freedom of writing..sorry Ste, posting a very heavy comment here; but it is disappointing and discouraging to see these comments from people who themselves are writers..
@ Sid, planning to go with the flow? π
i second Neha.. its aweful but if anyone [gender biased] let down their guard with overwhelming fantasies and non realistic desires there is 99.9 percent of being used by others.. it might be in any way emotional, money r wat so ever.. life's an excellent teacher tat way… no blames jus need to move on..
wd love to read more:)..keep penning:)