I wrote this poem for a 2nd std kid which I believe is one of the greatest help I did to someone .This will be a special poem for me as I am used to write sophisticated poem.This is a simple poem for a simple 8 yr old kid.
Some things are bounded by water all around,
Something cant live without water .
Something which whirls and curls its body .
Something which lives deep in the ocean .
Something which is predated by humans ,
Its the beautiful fish ;
beautiful to such an extent ,
that we keep it in our home .
but to vain we make it our food,
is it the beautiful fish ??
You wrote if for an 8th std kid ??? Wow..its amazing !!! The last 2 lines left a great impact on me !!:)